Wednesday, May 6, 2020
Dragon slayers chapter six....
The guard captain stammered " my lord.." The king interrupted him " FIND THEM AT ONCE! DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR!?"
The captain guard saluted " yes my lord.."
Meanwhile...
Raven woke up from a loud noise coming from the west. " Asher, Wake up! I think the guards are looking for us!"
Asher and Raven woke up their dragons and they flew into the bright night sky.
The palace guard aimed his bow and arrow at Asher. "Asher watch out! " Screamed Raven as The guard shot his bow.
Raven blocked the arrow with her sword. Asher sat on his dragon wide eyed. " T-thank you..R-Raven..
"No problem. Now lets go!'
To be continued..............................
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I'm still really enjoying your extended story Sofiya. You are doing so well with the punctuation and layout. Remember to keep adding interesting descriptive words to give us more ideas of whats happening. Foe example what was the loud noise - banging, thumping, screeching? What noise did the arrow make as Raven blocked it with her sword?
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