Red poppy what do you say?
please wear me on Anzac day.
Red poppy what do you tell?
Many soldiers in battle fell.
Red poppy what do we know?
That peace on earth should grow,grow,grow.
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Hi Sofiya, Great to see you have already taken Mrs J's advice about adding an Anzac poem to your blog. I like the poem. It's simple but tells a story about the reason for the poppy. Maybe next time you could draw a picture to go with it on Google Draw?
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful Anzac poem, Sofiya! The end is the part I like the most, I also wish that peace on earth will grow. Did you write this poem? Maybe next time you can think of a creative way to share it. Have you considered recording a video of yourself reciting this poem?
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